Sunday, September 2, 2007

The digestive system

I am a piece of fruit and half of me gets eaten.The piece of me gets chewed and slowly pushed down by the saliva the saliva was pushing me down to the esophagus.I'm almost to the stomach there were many tons of different kinds food in there. And we slowly get dissolved by the acid. The acid is so strong that it can almost cut through anything.The dissolved food was almost at the diadem (small tube under stomach) leading me and the other food into the small intestine we were at the small intestine and slowly being separated into pieces such as starch,protein,fat,water and fibre.

Some of the healthy pieces goes to the blood vessels and to the bones,muscles and many different kinds of organs the fat goes to the under of your skin,the protein goes to many types of body parts.

After the small intestine the food went to the pancreas and almost close to the large intestine the large intestine was also separating us the dissolved food looked like tiny small things.

If a person eats to many junk food or unhealthy food, the fat and starch will sometimes make the stomach unhappy that's why when a person eats to much junk they have Daria. But if a person eats a balanced diet that person will have lots of protein,fibre,calcium.

But people need some fat because it helps your body keep warm. But to much fat is your body's way of saying cut down the food. The fat of the piece of me in the large intestine doesn't go to organs because it doesent help.
some of the food was turned into brown shades at the rectum but the peice of me was still waiting at the large intestine for a few hours.
Im still here because i need to wait until other food come so that it can push me out but first im still in the large intestine getting closer and closer to the rectum.
Then finaly some other food comes and pushes me even closer to the rectum,because the brown shades last time already went out.
After a week or two I slowly became a brown shade at the rectum. but again still waiting until other food come and pushes the brown shade out into waste so that the brown shades arent going to stay there.





6 comments:

devilbats said...

6/10 because you don't have any pictures.

ironhead said...

6/10 same because you don't have any pictures.

Jane Ross said...

Hi Brodie. Your total score is 20/40. You got the following:
Knowledge 5/10
Spelling 5/5
Punctuation 4/5
Descriptive Words 3/5
Creativity 3/5
Relevant Pictures 0/5
Bibliography 0/5
Next time make sure that you check the criteria before uploading your work to your blog.

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Megatron Andrew said...

Hi Brodie, where's your pictures & why do you forget to put your bibliography? I'm so sorry that's why I gave you 6/10. However I'm proud of your homework!